-cough- I'm going to, uh, bow down to you now. Because you are so much better than I am and are so much more deserving of BNF ficblog. Please excuse me while I run away into the night to be incredibly guilty all over the place.

But seriously, yo - you carried the scene quite well throughout, and your underlying theme was subtly powerful. I love you. I'm going to stalk your writing, now. Ahem. You saw nothing.

Excellent job.