I really liked this, it was just so sad to read (which, for some reason, sadfics are my favorite ^-^) Seriously, especially the last part, it really got me depressed (which, like i said, is a good thing...I'm such a masochist ^-^') It's really interesting, too, cuz I always wondered how different the original Roxas was from the TwilightTown Roxas. Seriously, part of why I can't wait for 358/2 days to come out is to have a firmer grasp on Roxas's personality (and...to burn things using Axel's fire power ;P) I loved this, and you're such a good writer (I've been reading some of ur other fics, and even though yoai isn't my thing, they're really good ^-^) Good job :)
Wow. That was awesome!