http://tasteslikemiso.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] tasteslikemiso.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] insincere 2010-07-23 03:06 am (UTC)

I like the not-trust Hinamori feels, her nervousness, and the little nothing that is "-- if it were Hitsugaya-kun, of course, always --."

A nice suspenseful mood throughout the piece. Well done.

a little note, you have a 'Mommo' instead of 'Momo' somewhere in the middle-ish.
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